Speaking

I am thinking about speaking classes.
I have group home work. Our group decided to think about travel in Korea.
I took charege of secound day. Then, I was thinking. I have just finished thought about it.

This is secound day's plan.

We get up at seven thirty, and we preparation for go out such as eat break fast. This day’s break fast is rice, miso-soup, kimchee, nori and egg dish. After ate break fast and ready for go out, we leave hotel at ten o’clock.
First, we go to Nandaimon which is one of market of Korea.（We arrive at there at ten thirty.) There are many good goods. For example, clothes, jewelry, food, glasses, toys and so on. We can also eat many foods, so we look around in there, and we have a lunch then. We look for good food for lunch. We leave from there at 14 o’clock.
Next, we go to COEX mall which is big shopping mall. There is duty-free shop, so we can buy brand-name goods more cheaply. We will be able to buy many present for friends and Family. We look around there and we start go back hotel at 17 o’clock.After arrived at hotel, we take a shower and do relax there. At 19 o’clock, we go to dinner. This day’s dinner is smorgasbord. We can choose ourselves. If we drink, we have to ask staff. We come back own room and we preparation to sleep at 21 o’clock. And 22 o’clock, we go to bed.

What do you think about this plan??

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