Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

November 4, 2008

What is the most Important to me?


I watched Mrs. So I will introduce this movie now.
Main character are Daniel Hillard who has wife and their children, but he didn't have job, Miranda Hillard who is Daniel's wife and she is doing job and their kids, Lydia,Christopher and Natalie and Stu who is bossiness man and Euphegenia Doubtfire who helps children.
And minor character are Frank, Grolia, Jack Jonathan and so on.

One day, Daniel and his children wanted to have a party becasue that day was Chris's birthday. Then they did party until their mom came back. It was very very noisy, so neighbor, Gloria called Miranda.... So Miranda noticed what happen in her house. Then she went back soon and she asked them. She was very very angree.
Miranda asked her husband "I want to divorced you"... Daniel persuaded her, but she wouldn't say no. Therefor, he couldn't stay with his children everyday and he couldn't stay at thier house.

He was looking for new job for their family, but he couldn't find it soon. Finally, he got new job which is very hard job. And then, he heard what Miranda was looking for a home help for her kids. Daniel wanted to meet children a lot, so he decided to become their home help with funny idea. He good at changing voice, so he called her about it as some woman. And he played bad woman. Then he played great woman named Euphegenia Doubtfire. He passed interview with her. And she decided to her as a home help...... Then..... Daniel was doing job as Euphegenia Doubtfire......

It was very very funny. But I was thinking about something about family. My family is very very good.There are five people in my Japanese , dad mom, older sister and older brother and me. My dad is very good person. He goes to work everyday. But if he have holiday, he take somewhere to us. My mom is very very funny. Her smile is the best in the world. I am respect for my parents. And my sister is scary for me, but she is also good person!!! I think she is smart. And she is good at cooking. Her dishes are very nice. And My brother is great guy! I and he is very very good relationship as good friends. We always talk about school life, love, future and more. I can tell him everything. I think he is my brother also he is good my friend!I like to talk with my family when I go back home. If I get probrems, I talk with them about funny thing. Then I will be able to be happy. They make me very very happy.
What is the most important in family? I think smile is the most important in family. It was very bad mood in "Mrs. Doubtf" at fast. Husband and wife didn't live in friendship. I think it is very bad for their children and theirselves. My dad ane mom are very very good mood. So we can spend good time with family. My family make me happy. I think I need family forever.

And also I was thinking about me. Daniel was changed by family. I think it is very good things. I am changing now. I am changed by my dream. My dream is big dream, so nobady knows if it come true. So I thought I have to change my mind and I have to study more. Daniel wanted to meet his children more, so he could change. Therefore, I want to grant my dream, so I can do that. I thought what is the most important in my life when I watched it. My dream is very very important. And it is very very important for me to think "I NEVER GIVE UP".

I could think about many things when I watched this movie. If you don't know what is the most important for you, I think you should watch this movie. Then, you can find something for you. I thought I had a really good time for thinking about me and family.

(694 words)

July 13, 2008

did it

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Student ID: 07105
(last five digits of
your student no.)




Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c

(See: Note 1, below)




0.0. Overview




Reviews, Posts, Words, and More


[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)




1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])
















































































































































































































1.1. Showcase


Short
titles


[+ links]
Dates
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W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)


Introduce Myself

2008.04.09
3
250
1
0
0
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)


Have you ever watched Shrek?

2008.05.03
7
976
0
0
1
0
University life
08.05.18


Busy, but Interesting

2008.05.17
4
389
7
0
0
0
Another review
08.06.01


Our Future

2008.06.01
6
538
2
0
1
0
Language learning
history
08.06.15


Super Woman

2008.06.11
6
574
2
0
4
0
5th essay
(pending)
TBA
About Me

2008.07.02
























Totals---
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26

2727

12

0

6

0


Key:



¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length



W: number of words



C: number of comments



L: number of links



P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded



1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.




  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]




2.0. Comments



Busy, but Interesting






















































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*


"Office Hours: Gmail for Appointments"

2008.04.03
14 words
so-so
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Video of Milktea!!!

2008.07.08
26 words
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

Super Woman

2008.06.11
33
great
2.4. Most comments on:
Busy, but Interesting
2008.05.17223There are many comments
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
Busy, but Interesting
2008.05.17

223
there aer many comments
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.0528
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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128

I answered every questions
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
Great Day
2008.07.06
22

I became happy
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.07.08
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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22

good






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.




2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?





  • I locate the new comments on the top of my blog because if someone comment my blog, I can see it soon.



2.6. Additional reflections on comments






  • I think it is so good for me. If I find comment, I am happy.





3.0. Book Reviews


























































































































































































































































































3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01

Give us the Money

08.04.18

85

0
1-02
Key Trouble

08.04.21
72
0
1-03
The Litter Queen
08.04.21

64
0
1-04

RESCUE!

08.04.22

63
0
1-05

Survival Adventure

08.04.27

53
0
1-06
Yellow Bus

08.05.10

209

0
1-07

Real Monkey!?
08.05.12

291

0
1-08

For Beautiful Earth
08.05.18
62

0
1-09
Purse 08.05.20
70

0
1-10


Wenny and Will


08.05.24

262

0
1-11

Life

08.06.03
189
0
1-12
Worst girl
08.06.16
83
0
1-13

I don't like

08.06.16

55
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TOTALS:

1597

0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).




3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.





  • My best book revew is 1-10 Wenny and Will because I could write good well.

I think if people read this review, everyone wants read it!





4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media







































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?

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4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? ○

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



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4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?○

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (13) AND "reviews" (3)
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  • "essays" (8) AND "portfolios" (1l, without "proto-")

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  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

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  • "links" (0) AND "media" (3)

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  • "movies" (0) AND "photos" (43)

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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
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  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?




    • __4_ other labels attached to three or more posts
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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
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  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?




    • __43_ posts including pictures or other graphics
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  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*




    • _0__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?





  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?




    • __0_ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:




    1. ...nothing


    2. ...


    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.





  1. ...Photo: I use many photoes. I found out it on internet.


  2. ...Font: I tried to use many kinds of fonte. I changed font size many time.


  3. ...sentence: I tried to write many sentence.




5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing






  • ...I am so busy, so I didn't write blog every day. However, this is so interesting. My English skils are maybe up. I have many mistakes when I write blog. Therefore, if I am able to know my mistake, I am Happy.




6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors






  • ... I think blog is writting my mind, so I have to write my mind or opinion.

____________________
Notes:





  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).


  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.


  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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June 25, 2008

Agree with you

My best day


I like this blog because it is very interesting. I could understand her best memories. That picture is so good, and looks like delicious. I also wanted to go abroad when I was high school student, however, my parents disagreed about it. Therefore I couldn't go abroad, so she is luckey girl!!

(56 words)

June 11, 2008

Super Woman

Today, I will talk about My learning language history.



I was interested in English when I was elementary student, nine years old. One of my friends went to cram school of English. I heard about English from her, so I also wanted to go there and learn English. Then, I went to cram school of English every Friday. Entered the junior high school, I had a English classes. I was looking forward to attend it every week. I loved learning English. However, I stopped going to cram school because I was very busy to do club activity and so on. I stopped going to cram school, only I enjoyed learning English in junior high school. From then on I have studied English for 10 years.




When I was high school student, I entered English speech contest. It was very difficult to me, but it was very studied for me. And I could make many foreign friends in my high school because international community was very active and school had sister school in America. Therefore, I could talk with them in English. It was good chance for learning native English.




When I was second grade of high school, I had a Korean classes. My father was always went to Korean for his job and told me about there, so I was interested in Korea and took course in Korean. Teacher was not Japanese, he was native Korean, so we could learn an accurate pronunciation. I studied again and again because Korean was very difficult, but I wanted to understand it. Then, I get full marks in the test.
My high school had also sister school in Korea, so Korean students came to my school every year. I talked with them. This is also help me to study Korean.


I went on to college. I was first grade last year. I took manicures in many types. That were excited me, especially Spanish was great! I knew some Spanish words because I had a foreign friend who speaks Spanish and taught me it. I learned Spanish grammar and conversation. And now, I am second grade of college. I also am taking Spanish classes this year. There are only four students in Spanish classes, so we can learn more deeply than last year. Sometimes, I call my friend who I told before and I speak some Spanish. Then, she surprised what I could speak Spanish.



Finally, I started to learn Chinese because my father's friend who is travel agent said " Do you study Chinese? If you want to work in travel company, you should study it." I didn't think what "I want to be travel agent like my father' friend" at first, but I was interested in that occupation, so I decided to learn Chinese. There are two times when I study Chinese in a week, Tuesday and Friday. Chinese pronunciation is very difficult. It is no close to Japanese, English and Spanish. I think my Chinese skill is very very bad, but I am studying hard to master it. Then, I want to make a perfect score on the next test, so I do my best and I never give up.


This is the way my history of language. I am thinking now "I studied four language, but I didn't master any language....." Therefore, I want to continue to study English, Korean, Spanish and Chinese. Then, I become super woman who can speak many language!

(574 words)

June 1, 2008

Our Future

I saw the movie which title is "The Day After Tomorrow". Do you know this movie? It is important for us. This movie teaches me very important things.
Now, I will introduce this movie.

Main characters are Jack who is doing research in global warming, Frank and Peter are helping Jack, Sam who is Jack's son, Terry Rapson who is scientist in Scotland. Minor characters are Parke, Brian and Laura and so on.


Jack thought "indicates runway warming pushed Earth into an ice age. And global warming is melting the polar ice caps and disrupting this flow". Therefore, He appealed for measure against global warming to everyone. However, everyone didn't believe him what about coming ice age, so they didn't anything. They should have acted soon for it..... Sam went to New York for quiz meeting with Brian and Laura.

The weather of Earth was a little changing. In Tokyo, the very big hailstones were falling. And other country had many hurricanes. In the addition, it had been raining in New York. After that, the Earth's temperature fell. Animals look different from everyday. Terry Rapson called Jack and tells him what the Earth is changing. One of their NOMAD buoys registered 13-degree drop in surface temperature. At first, they thought it was malfunction, but it was not true. There were four more across the North Atlantic showing the same things. Then, Jack appealed for it to Mr. Vice President again. However, he didn't still believe him.....

The weather was becoming worse. Sam and other friends couldn't go back home because train and plain stopped for weather. Lucy who is Sam's mother and Jack worried about him. Everyone ran for their life. Antarctic ice melted and New York has been affected flooding. Sam called his father, Jack and got advice from him what don't go out and wait for us. Sam had believed his father and had waited to their.

At last, the government believed Jack and put Jack's ideas into action. Then, the ice age was becoming. And Jack, Frank and peter left for New York. The car didn't move on their way, so they walked so long time. They were confronted with some difficulties........ What happened after that? You should watch after this.


I was thinking about global warming after watch movie. Recently, the Earth is having serious problems. On one hand the world is development of technology, car and so on; on the other, it leads up to the destruction of Earth. Practically, Mr. Fukuda who is prime minister of Japan is meeting about global warming with Africa. What we should we do? I think we should notice that consciousness of our Earth's limitations. We also have limit. And also Earth have limit. There is a limit to everything. We have to protect our Earth, or we won't live in the Earth near future. Everyone think "this story is fiction, just made it for movie......" However, it is not true. "The Day After Tomorrow" may our future if we didn't think about any things, so we have to take problems seriously. Everyone should watch this movie and think about now Earth' environment.
(538 words)
(total: 7217 words)

May 27, 2008

my other classes

There are many subjects in my other classes. For example, international low, Chinese, Spanish and so on. All subject are very difficult especially Chinese. It is very very difficult. I can't understand some grammar, but I can understand Kanji. It is a little different from Japan. However no problem. I am interested in international low because it is very useful. It is very difficult, so I study hard. If I could not understand, I ask teacher. I changed my attitude beside last year. It is good. I am thinking what I want to know many things.

May 17, 2008

Busy, but Interesting

Today, I will introduce my university life. My university life is so busy, but fun. I go to KGU. They have many faculties. I am majoring English. University's mood is very good. There are many natures. I love university's garden. Every morning, I get up at six o'clock. I say “I’m sleepy”to my mother everyday. I eat breakfast and I go to university by car and train. There are many people and crow on the train, so sometimes I become hate ride on it. I arrive at station where near my university. Then we walk for go to school. We arrive at school at about eight forty five. I check billboard of my department. Then I go to room where is done first period.

First period is start at nine o'clock. I learn many kind of subject. I learn international law, Spanish, Chinese and so on. I also learn such English as speaking, writing, reading and listening. All subjects are very difficult for me, but I make every effort to master. Studying many things is very difficult, but it is interesting. After second period, I have a lunch time. I eat lunch which is made by my mother with my friend. We enjoy eating lunch and talking. Then, third period start at 13 o'clock. I become sleepy at that time. However, I refrain from it. Finally, I take fourth period classes. After that I go back home.

I ride on train at four fifty everyday. There are many people but not more than morning train. Sometimes I can sit in the seat, but sometimes I have to stand up. When I have to do it, I get tired. I am so happy if I can sit at seat. I do a review of the last lesson after go back home. Then I go to bet at one o'clock.

I spend my university life thus. It is so busy and so hard, but it is all for me. Therefore, I have to do my best. I believe that if I do my possible, I can dream come true in the future, so I never idle about own university life. I don't waste time on my university life. Why don't you also cherish your university life?

(389 words)
(total: 5574 words)

May 5, 2008

Habits

My food and eating habits are good for health because every meal are made by mother. I don't have hate food. I like all things. The meal which my mother made is well-balanced diet for health. Recently, convenience store's meals are popular, and many children buy and eat.But it is not good for health. Resent children like there's meal than Mon's meal. And there are many fat children in Japan because they eat many food like not well-balanced. If we always eat convenience store's, we will die soon, so we have to think about food and Eating habits.

(104 words)

May 3, 2008

Outline for essey

☆Title: "Shrek"

☆characters
main characters: Shrek, Donkey, Fiona, Farquadd, Dragon
sub-characters:Pinocchio, Cinderella, Snow White, The Wolf and so on.

☆Story
Beginning: start of matter
Middle: adventure, secret of Fioa
Happning:Marriage ceremony
End of story

☆feeling

☆Themes of this story

April 25, 2008

My hobbies

I have many hobbies. First, I like to do sport, so if I have free time, I do sport. Doing spot is very nice for me because I can refresh. To add to it is good for health. Next, I love listening to music. I always listen to music if I have free time. In the car, every time I listen to music. When I god sad things, I also listen to music. Finally, My last hobby is corresponding with many foreigner friends, so I write many letter to friend. When I got letters from friend, I am so happy, so I can't stop it.
(106 words)

April 16, 2008

MUSIC

Good evening! How are you?

I will talk about my favorite music. What your favorite music?
I like to listen American Music what kind R & B. I don't like music of reggae. I like hip-hop. However, I don't like Japanese hip-hop. R & B music is so cool because they have good rhythm. It is not slowly but also not fast. My favorite R & B singer is USHER. He is American African. His voice is so good. I like him.

I listen to music on car everyday. I think that listening to my favorite music is good for me, so I love music. (106 words)

April 15, 2008

Writing

I went to first writing classes on Wednesday first period. I met Mr. B..... He is so good teacher and he is charming. I checked my report which I wrote before spring vacation. After that I typed it on blog. I could not understand some Mr. Beaufaite's English, but my friend helps me, so I could understand. If I have a question, I have to say "Mr. Beaufaite" and raise a hand. I like it because I had never done it. I had a good time at first Writing calasses. I like witing classes. I am looking forward to next writing classes.(103 words)

April 9, 2008

Introduce Myself

Hello. I'm Narumi I. I will talk about myself.

I have 5 people in my family, Mom, Dad, older sister and brother and me. I go to KGU in Kumamoto where is center of Kyushu. Do you know Kyushu? Kyushu is one of district in Japan where west of Japan.

I am a English major. I want to be an English teacher for kids. It is why I chose it.


By the way, do you like sports? I like sport very much, especially basketball and soft tennis. When I was elementary student, I belonged to basketball club and I was captain at six grades. I belonged to soft tennis club when I was junior high school student and also then I was captain. Doing sports is good for me because I can enjoy myself when I do it.

I like to look at view of nature if I have a time. I always look at the view from home on somewhere. Even if I am sad, it is make me happy. I can relax when I look at view.

I have a one question. How is the weather there? I want to know it because it is too important for me.

I am looking forward to go to there and meet you. I can't sleep because the home stay excited me. I can't until meet you. Thank you for acceptance and reading the letter. I will send you a letter with photos. See you again.
(250 words)