Student ID: 07105
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | Introduce Myself | 2008.04.09 | 3 | 250 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) | Have you ever watched Shrek? | 2008.05.03 | 7 | 976 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| University life 08.05.18 | Busy, but Interesting | 2008.05.17 | 4 | 389 | 7 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Another review 08.06.01 | Our Future | 2008.06.01 | 6 | 538 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 | Super Woman | 2008.06.11 | 6 | 574 | 2 | 0 | 4 | 0 |
| 5th essay (pending) TBA | About Me | 2008.07.02 | ||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 26 | 2727 | 12 | 0 | 6 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Busy, but Interesting
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "Office Hours: Gmail for Appointments" | 2008.04.03 | 14 words | so-so |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Video of Milktea!!! | 2008.07.08 | 26 words | good |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Super Woman | 2008.06.11 | 33 | great |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Busy, but Interesting | 2008.05.17 | 223 | There are many comments |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Busy, but Interesting | 2008.05.17 | 223 | there aer many comments |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.0528 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 128 | I answered every questions |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Great Day | 2008.07.06 | 22 | I became happy |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2008.07.08 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 22 | good |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- I locate the new comments on the top of my blog because if someone comment my blog, I can see it soon.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I think it is so good for me. If I find comment, I am happy.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | Give us the Money | 08.04.18 | 85 | 0 |
| 1-02 | Key Trouble | 08.04.21 | 72 | 0 |
| 1-03 | The Litter Queen | 08.04.21 | 64 | 0 |
| 1-04 | RESCUE! | 08.04.22 | 63 | 0 |
| 1-05 | Survival Adventure | 08.04.27 | 53 | 0 |
| 1-06 | Yellow Bus | 08.05.10 | 209 | 0 |
| 1-07 | Real Monkey!? | 08.05.12 | 291 | 0 |
| 1-08 | For Beautiful Earth | 08.05.18 | 62 | 0 |
| 1-09 | Purse | 08.05.20 | 70 | 0 |
| 1-10 | 08.05.24 | 262 | 0 | |
| 1-11 | 08.06.03 | 189 | 0 | |
| 1-12 | Worst girl | 08.06.16 | 83 | 0 |
| 1-13 | I don't like | 08.06.16 | 55 | 0 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: | 1597 | 0 |
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- My best book revew is 1-10 Wenny and Will because I could write good well.
I think if people read this review, everyone wants read it!
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...Photo: I use many photoes. I found out it on internet.
- ...Font: I tried to use many kinds of fonte. I changed font size many time.
- ...sentence: I tried to write many sentence.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...I am so busy, so I didn't write blog every day. However, this is so interesting. My English skils are maybe up. I have many mistakes when I write blog. Therefore, if I am able to know my mistake, I am Happy.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ... I think blog is writting my mind, so I have to write my mind or opinion.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
