July 13, 2008

did it

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Student ID: 07105
(last five digits of
your student no.)




Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c

(See: Note 1, below)




0.0. Overview




Reviews, Posts, Words, and More


[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)




1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])
















































































































































































































1.1. Showcase


Short
titles


[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Self-introduction
08.04.20
(250 words)


Introduce Myself

2008.04.09
3
250
1
0
0
0
Movie review
08.05.04
(300 words)


Have you ever watched Shrek?

2008.05.03
7
976
0
0
1
0
University life
08.05.18


Busy, but Interesting

2008.05.17
4
389
7
0
0
0
Another review
08.06.01


Our Future

2008.06.01
6
538
2
0
1
0
Language learning
history
08.06.15


Super Woman

2008.06.11
6
574
2
0
4
0
5th essay
(pending)
TBA
About Me

2008.07.02
























Totals---
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26

2727

12

0

6

0


Key:



¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length



W: number of words



C: number of comments



L: number of links



P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded



1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.




  • [Remove these square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]




2.0. Comments



Busy, but Interesting






















































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*


"Office Hours: Gmail for Appointments"

2008.04.03
14 words
so-so
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*

Video of Milktea!!!

2008.07.08
26 words
good
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

Super Woman

2008.06.11
33
great
2.4. Most comments on:
Busy, but Interesting
2008.05.17223There are many comments
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
Busy, but Interesting
2008.05.17

223
there aer many comments
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.0528
---
---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
---
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128

I answered every questions
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
Great Day
2008.07.06
22

I became happy
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008.07.08
---
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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22

good






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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.




2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?





  • I locate the new comments on the top of my blog because if someone comment my blog, I can see it soon.



2.6. Additional reflections on comments






  • I think it is so good for me. If I find comment, I am happy.





3.0. Book Reviews


























































































































































































































































































3.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
1-01

Give us the Money

08.04.18

85

0
1-02
Key Trouble

08.04.21
72
0
1-03
The Litter Queen
08.04.21

64
0
1-04

RESCUE!

08.04.22

63
0
1-05

Survival Adventure

08.04.27

53
0
1-06
Yellow Bus

08.05.10

209

0
1-07

Real Monkey!?
08.05.12

291

0
1-08

For Beautiful Earth
08.05.18
62

0
1-09
Purse 08.05.20
70

0
1-10


Wenny and Will


08.05.24

262

0
1-11

Life

08.06.03
189
0
1-12
Worst girl
08.06.16
83
0
1-13

I don't like

08.06.16

55
0



































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TOTALS:

1597

0

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).




3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.





  • My best book revew is 1-10 Wenny and Will because I could write good well.

I think if people read this review, everyone wants read it!





4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media







































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?



4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (13) AND "reviews" (3)






  • "essays" (8) AND "portfolios" (1l, without "proto-")






  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)






  • "links" (0) AND "media" (3)






  • "movies" (0) AND "photos" (43)


4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?





  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?




    • __4_ other labels attached to three or more posts
---
---








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4.3. Links & media---
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4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?





  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?






  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?




    • __43_ posts including pictures or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?





  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*




    • _0__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?





  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?




    • __0_ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:




    1. ...nothing


    2. ...


    3. ...

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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.





  1. ...Photo: I use many photoes. I found out it on internet.


  2. ...Font: I tried to use many kinds of fonte. I changed font size many time.


  3. ...sentence: I tried to write many sentence.




5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing






  • ...I am so busy, so I didn't write blog every day. However, this is so interesting. My English skils are maybe up. I have many mistakes when I write blog. Therefore, if I am able to know my mistake, I am Happy.




6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors






  • ... I think blog is writting my mind, so I have to write my mind or opinion.

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Notes:





  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08).


  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.


  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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